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Old 04-24-06, 06:43 PM   #5
Precize
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heres 24 lines..i wasnt feelin this topic much

assembled a time machine with my worn-in bare hands...
i open the door, in the middle is where the chair stands..
then i say a prayer and...off i go into the distant future..
only 13, i wanna see if i have kids..and if my childrens losers..
arrived into the future..40 sumthin years from now..
people see me appear out of nowhere, they wonder why i came here and how..
the crowded streets are made of metal with white lines...
looked up n saw a Ad for antique iPods...layed out on a bright sign..
all the lights left my eyes blind..
the screen on my watch revealed wat year it was with a timeline..
hungry, so i walk into a mcdonalds...a robot comes to take my order..
requiring tips, slots on their chest show their to be paid with quarters..
same good food, faster thou...the wait is shorter..
finish eatin...and decide to go look for what ive came to see..
but then a man walks in with a tag on his shirt..he has the same last name as me..
i feel the birthmark on my face..he has identical scars on his frame..
are facial features are the same..throwing something in the trash, he
starts to aim..but misses, and the napkin drops right by my feet..
are eyes meet..i break the ice and say im you, from the past..
he laughs and replys with..yo man thats a ton of trash..
then the earth starts to crack and shack..i didnt know what to do at first
ive tampered with the future, scientists warned me it could affect the entire universe..
all of a sudden the mickey dees start to cave in..
and then............
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