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Old 12-29-04, 01:50 AM   #10
Scareface
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Voted For: High Fructose

aii this is how i feel

HF
You Came wit some nice punchez ......your structure was good............and your meta's was good but you need to work on multi's and vocab Bcuz thats what was lacked other than that i like your verse////////

Skriptz
You Came strong......jus not strong enough bcuz yo left out alot of basic thing that a verse needs and thats what hurt you the most...............I think really you need to go n try to work on ya style..........no hate .................jus a suggestion

*********************************************** The Favor Better Be return or else lol j/k***************
* but plz do im askin as a favor plz do return the favor....peace************************************

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