Thread: My First One
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Old 04-16-03, 11:42 AM   #4
Narcicyst
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aight this was a simple rhyme...sorry but i wasnt feelin it...need to work on your complexity and shit...i'm an asshole critic as i say in a lot of replies you need to have good meats and similies in your shit dawg...keep elevatin though...one
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