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Old 09-16-06, 02:51 PM   #2
Young Kidd (LM)
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Quality is weird. I hear the static in the back..Sounds bad..how is this album quality?...

Flow is off at times..The double vocal's don't fit right...You chose the wrong times to do those..and they are off a little..the flow again isn't right, it fits the beat, but it doest fit your voice...like you forced the whole track..tryna speed it up a little...

Chorus - Was actually okay, not the best... It could be WAY better, but it's not the worst I ever heard...

damn man..fix that flow...man...work on it all..it's pretty basic...nothing real special about the track...simple rhymes and scheme..nothing really your own..

oh and your SC- Pictuer/Album cover..whatever it is..is ass...sorry..

work on it.
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