Playing.....
Sound like paranoid. lol.

Flow isnt natural, your struggling to spit your lyrics or either reading it straight off the paper.

With yoru dubs, add more emotion to it , the reason for dubs is to switch it up from the actual verse.

Your emotion sucks, its just plain ass.

Your content is generic bullshit, I could see you getting better if you are willing to listen to feedback, but I get the feeling you one a those kdis who considers himself allready dope, so wont be willing to listen to constructive crit.


Overall this isnt good, its sucks really.