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Old 07-24-06, 11:17 PM   #11
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Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

You got this easy here we go.

Oz-You had some potential in your verse to make it somewhat decent...but first off your lines are way to stretched to get any kind of flow or attraction to your punchlines....and as for using fake personals...im sure thats all you had..cuz i doubt he's 40...and how do u know if he's a virgin.....and your quotations werent creative with wordplay...just quoted cuz it was the title of a movie or w/e...no cleverness at all...and lady in the water...have you seen it cuz i have....nothing about a women sinking in the water fam...but you just work on improving those weaknesses and stay up.

Wordz ah-god-
You started off kinda weak i mean the first bar...kinda played a bit ay? lol..but the rest was original and good name play had nice hitting punches.....good mulites incorporated flow made your punches more appealing....just overall came harder and more fluent.


your flows watered down, son you gotta be kidding
'Coz I'll beat oz till he leaves, and then he'll be taking WonderLand wit em
I wont even drop 16 at all, I could stop you wit no prob
Slow hustle is no hustle . . .
. . . That explains why he has no job at all
kid you soft like pussy, the flows twice as wet
You aint battling vets . . .
. . . You battling niggaz that would rip the words out of your neck


vs.

nothing really...

you got this 1

v/wordz a god
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