efusive:

you had some really dope punches in ya verse i was feeling them but a couple were played but not overly played just seen the same concept's and/or set-ups before... it was a good verse though... good punches.. personals were average seeing as there were no direct personals..flow was decent structure was good.

newport:

you put a little more effort into this battle than you usually do and it helped a bit.. your closer was a sick ass bar and probably the best of the battle.. flowed consistenly.. a couple decent punches but the rest were really good.. personals.. didnt see any direct ones but still a good verse.


v/ newport

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