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Old 02-19-05, 06:09 PM   #9
The Black Plague
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Close battle but imma give it to Hotshh...

Hot- Nice verse by you... I liked ya multies, plus ya verse was easier to understand.. overall.. ya opener killed it, tight line with nice multies.. u kinda fell off in between, then ya closer was nice... Overall nice verse wit nice punches, good flow and good multies

Dex- Decent from you, but ya verse was way stretched.. even wit small font it almost took the whole page across..some of ya lines i didn't understand, like the jamaican crime line.. wtf? The nick nolte line was prolly ya best, but overall not too many nice punches... I think since ya lines was so stretched it was hard to see the multies... so ya multies was decent, Hotssh's was better, and his punches was better so he gets my vote...

Overall, Hot takes it wit better punches and multies, a better struc and flow...

V/Hotshh!
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