^ lol hades

O.k here we goo...

Blazin, your verse was alright. the flow was the best part though. everything else seemed kinda boring, i mean just the way you worded everything was dull... there was little imagery and it almost seemed like you were using a rhyme dictionary for the verse and majority of your lines were filler. You needed more complexity, should tried adding metaphors/ similies or philosophy into it.. Just work on metas and your writing will improve...

My vote goes to H.D based on imagery and the read it provided, had good philsophy and established a good beat in my head. Let me say one thing though H... You're lucky you had internals because your flow was absolutely terrible in some places.

v/ H.d for an overall better read. pzzz

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