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Old 07-11-08, 11:32 PM   #6
Mauvais Loup
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From: Cum-blo-us, Ohio
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fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
weak
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
no
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
wackerz
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
too obvious of nameplay w/o a punch. and i'm sure it's played on him.
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
seen it used better on him
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
again, seen better.
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
too bland
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
i've used this concept and imo, i used it better.

you really need to work on your wording. you had some decent concepts (although mostly played) but i've seen them worded so much better. your wording lacks sting which takes away from your entire verse.


kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
played and weak wording.
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
bland.
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
this seems too obvious but cool nameplay.
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
weak.
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
ok.
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
ok, cool
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
no, that was corny.
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
played

i've seen you drop way better than this. idk wtf you were doing here, if you took it easy or what.

disappointed in this battle, though i'd have at least one decent verse to read...ram had better wording.

vote-Ramcees
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