jcb ... need to seperate ya bars like this homey ...

10-20 bars, can you do that dude?
you'll be like on-air countdown people and just "stop at 2"/
cuz i'll make u "lose your life" like u "dropped ur cereal",
have the mods arrest me, kill a cop, then drop the serial/

^ see ... like that.....u had good metas and some ok wordplay ... punches & personals were ehhhh......not too shabby....but you do need to elevate your punches and if you type ur verse like i showed u ur flow will improve as well.......but u easily got the idea....10/20

Under .... good..... easy win 4 u.....punches were all that was needed....wordplay and metas were eh...ok......ur struct was kinda streteched....but ur flow was still decent.....all in all a good verse cause of ur creativity/originality & punches...
you basically did all u had to to win... 13/20
vote- under... and yea.... im not center sight kid ...

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