Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
no this was horrific...doesnt make sense..sorry

Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
hmm...i will give you an ounce of credit here
even the concept is played as hell.. in other words it wasnt complete trash

Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
u lost points for sayn "Worster" that is not a word
if you find that word in the dictionary please show me..
even if you meant Worser..guess what thats not a word either
i stopped at the made up word by the way..so i have no idea
what the punch was, cus it really doesnt matter

Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
no..nuff said, i just didnt like it

Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left..
I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
first of all i dnt like the three line rhyme scheme..
some people can do it but you cant... sorry

Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
nope..lines were too stretched..didnt like the punch anyway

Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star
wtf was that, that was a sad closer man,jsut sad
too stretched..

Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
wordplay attempt failed

If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
nope...not much here either

Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
nope...i am gettin tired of this

Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
thats was bad man...not feelin this one either

Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
forced wordplay....didnt like this either

Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
nope...what is going on..this is a championship match remember

Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...


lets wrap this up..
sorry man , i wasnt feelin your verse too much either
your lines were stretched, too many links...thats -played and the
punched just didnt do it for me





ok all in all
this was not a good battle...
Spul spoiled it for everybody with the cum line
and the rest of his verse didnt make up for it..

Apo..was a little better which is why he gets my vote..
Poli wasnt good either

now go ahead, bitch and complain about my vote and my comments
but thats the only way you are going to get better, by
reading criticism...
anyway i will stop here....


V/Apothesis

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