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Old 07-29-04, 01:57 PM   #13
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Damnn....Damnn....Damnnnnnnnnnnnn...This Was One Of The Best Topical Battles I Seen On this Site...Not One Not Two But Three Of Yall Came With Some Dope Shit..
I Liked EveryLine Of Everyones Verse...Yall All Had Diffrent Styles But All Was Tight..

L.I..I Could Relate To Your Verse More Than Anyones Yours Was Actually Funny..And Entertaining...And It Was A Nice Drop Throughout....

Open..How It All Began...
The festivities began as alcohol was drained into my body...
Drank so much in one hour it seemed like it was my hobby...
People all around engulfed in liquor as my birthday passed...
Two fourties downed in two hours...pfff you do the math...
Its amazing to live through the horror i was put through that night...
And to think it was all my decisions...shit just dont seem right...

That Was Good...9.4/10

Bestline..Holdin an empty bottle.. screamin jibberish as i strolled along...
Next thing i remember im on a porch screamin DING-DONG!!...

Humor..^^ Lmao 9.6/10

Closer..went into a choma, survived, and realized I had some problems...
Signed up for AA, started a yourh group, and solved em...

NiCe Ending To It 9.2/10

Overall..9.4/10

Flow..Underrated Emcee Is Finally Over Now..Your Drop Was Tight....Intresting Way Of Doin It And Excuted On The Topic...

Opener..The Grass Was Green...Sun Was Bright...It Promised A Good Day
I Was Just Sitting On The Park Bench Reading The Afternoon Away

Pretty Good Pretty Descent 9.1/10

Bestline..I Was Embarrased And Angry I Possessed One Million Feelings At Once
Last Thing I Remember Was Me Yelling And Knocking Him Out With A Punch

^^ LMAO Nice Humor 9.4/10

Closer..So Hear Me Out, After All This I Managed To Bandage Internal Wounds
To Be Encapsulated By No Justification Forever Trapped In It's Womb

9.6/10

Overall verse..9.3/10

~R~..Creative Work..Also Understood The Concept Of Your Drop Pretty Nice Flow...

opener..Why Does Drug Money Have More Value Than Our Circulation..
Why Can't I Say What I Want Without Constant Debations..

Feel That 9.7/10

Bestline..Why Does The Us Customs Keep Evidence From The Federal Department..
Why Do We Have Homeless People When We Are Full of Empty Apartments..

Damnn Got A Point...9.6/10

Closer..Why Am I The Only One In Frustration To Devise A New Creation..
But I Guess Thats Just My Salvation To My Mental Justifications..

Good ending 9.5/10

Overall.9.6/10

~R~ Verse Was More Catchy..L.I And Flow HAd A Story Verse....All Good..~R~ Took This Because The Stuff He Said Was The Truest Of Justification...

Winner..~R~
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