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Old 06-13-05, 05:32 PM   #8
.KnIghTmArE.
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"

lmao...7/10

Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"

good...7/10

You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!

damn...thats just mean...9/10

Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"

nice...8/10

All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" *

genius...10/10

barz...u really ripped it on this 1...nothing less than wut id expect from u...theres really not much i can tell u to improve on...so keep droppin...41/50



SPOOK...
Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame

played as fuck...3/10

cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances

gay...no fillers in battle verse ...0/10

ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt

again...no self glorification or fillers...0/10

dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination

doesnt make sense...2/10

that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2

ok...5/10

u need work on wordplay...structure...punches especially...and metas...keep workin on it...10/50
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