Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194585
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This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles
^^^best punch... nice concept, somethin new... this punch alone would of won the battle for you... i like this and your last bar was decent... the rest were either too basic or played... but decent drop
spook-
that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
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i think this was an attempt at wordplay so i see u might know how to do it, add more to your verse wit punches and you'll be on a better track...
think of a diss while havin having their name in in your head at the same time like...
this kids soft wack and plane, needs to add somethin gangsta to his game
cuz the last time he had a bar that was hard was when he wrote his name