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Old 03-04-07, 02:50 PM   #7
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i guess this is ok to vote on...



Dudes a bitch, I mean for real look at this text ties
And when I say B..
I'm not talking about your group, just ya fucking breast size
wording was crap but the idea was ok..

vs




srry im droppin out of the league so You an have the win
and Watch how I make this a Punchline So the match will be even
So Let me throw my Last punch ...While Im consantly Writtin
and Syntax bitin of rhymes like the ears of Hollyfield and Tyson

this sucked, tyson lines are played as fuck.

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