Contruction Houses Verse

yo..
I hate when my house falls inferior to someone else's,... the point is dumb
even if its potentially better..people often complain n' CG sighs..join the 'club'..
Meh play on words for this, nothing special too me…
now your in the clear..with your houses outside appearance..its fit for conduct
every1 goes with the wood finish..ur jus the first to use it as a finished product
NICE! Im feeling this one, it was present well in second line too
ya mom sucks, n ya need a 'Gateway' for that driveway..we shoulda showed him
we'll 'monitor' ya progress..so call us when ya lawns r big enuff for us to 'modem'
I like this, though without the CPU nameplays, the concept is weak, obviously the plays take this bar to another level, nice creativity.
all that money has got ya gassed up..I'm guessin its gone, I'll jus scar ya mind..
n I agree ya driveway is superior...but atleast I can afford to park a car in mine.
Flow was a bit choppy at the end, but I like the play on this, pretty funny.
ya far from fine..ya could probably sparr in time, rep ya shelter?.this dikes chicken
was a nice home..but from the pic looks like ya 'scrambled away'..like 'a Vick did'..
only problem that makes this w/p forced {evicted/a vick did sound alike, so its not forced in that way} is the literacy and grammer of how u said it, no one would say in a sentence, like evicted, and just end the sentence, you can tell theres a grammar problem just saying it out loud…so this is a creative concept, just not good wording..
your gone..ya got nowhere to go..ya mom's occupation?she aint' fit for datin son
far as ya roof goes?..guessin that where ya mom derives her inspiration from..
not feeling this as a closer, doesn’t match up to the res of ur bars…


Hard Hitting Bars-2
Decent Bars-3
Bars That Need Improvement-1



Club Houses Verse


Fear, your really lost in the woods with this one. no doubt!
And you'll never live in the fast lane bitch, ya got no house.
Not a good opener..setup was better then punch, so that’s bad structure..
Ya know what they say bout dudes n big trucks n small ego's
On a scale from 1 ta 10, buildin houses...they all zero
This is okay, still though, nothing hard in it
Why the fuck you need 6 windows?....in a forest
Seriously, thats probably why ya so mental...And just borin
setup and punch weren’t good…not feeling this
How Tha fuck u get to ya front poorch, that involves a goal
Cuz every time you put ya next foot forward, you fall in a hole
This ones kinda funny, not totally accurate, but decent..
Construction? shiiiiiit I don't mean to knock ya boots off
BUT
that whole fuckin things at a slant dude, its NOT JUST ya rooftop
hahaha, this ones a lot better then all your other bars..
Dude's short for words, and you still can't figure it out kid
Really..... makin them moves, just not buildin ya house yet
Naw, nothing special or even decent again…


Hard Hitting Bars-1
Decent Bars-2
Bars That Need Improvement-3


Overall:


Best Use Of Bars-Lay
Punches-Lay
W/p-Lay
On Topicness-Lay {used it more to his advantage}
Flow-CG

VOTE—Well, overall I see this as a very lopsided battle, lay fear takes everything but flow…So my vote obv. goes to lay fear.