Hook is good, it woulda been better if you wouldn't have tried to change your voices for it. It woulda sounded better in your normal voice.

Verse 1:
Flow is nice, delivery is stable which is good. Sound very comfortable on the mic. Lyrics are decent it works for the track. Good verse.

Verse 2:
Flow is cool, got that Harlem swag going which is cool. Delivery has gotten leaps and bounds better from last time I heard. Lyrics are cool. I def. like your swag on this you sound comfortable in your own skin.


RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243871