at the beginin u were on the beat nicely but u fell off, and didnt get back on for a while..

lyrics r hot, but try to shorten ure shit u stretching it alot.
beats cool
deliverys cool
mic presence iight
ure voice is wierd..do u have an accent? sounds like it..

anyways tracks decent, keep practicin and ull get better cause u def got potential.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220500
RTF^^

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