That was what was in the pm you sent to youself mate.
Sorry if it wasn't all there.


Fuck Yuu- A nice take on the topic. You described your characters mental state pretty well and illustriated the instituation with solid imagery and vocab. It would've been better in my mind if you could've worked your introduction into the man piece instead of just typing up the background to the piece.

Alpah- Pretty dope, the story trundled along nicely with interesting twists and turns from start to finish, nice use of imagery throughout although i felt the piece faltered a bit when the guy started listing his crimes to the priest. The rhyme scheme could've been stronger but the ingredients for a dope piece were all there.

Vote- Alpha, for a stronger piece overall.


Sorry if i fucked up your drop fuck yuu, if that wasn't what you wanted, PM me when it's rectified and i'll review this battle again.