Hells Fire:
Look someone made a new method of wack n dick
playin wingman ya duck then goose i mavrick ya chick
unaccpetable
reputation got ya head off ya shoulders with undefeated borders
aputation leave ya face blue crippled with white handicaped orders
what are you talkin about?
ya fifteen kid cant legally see R rated without his mommy
use a fake I.D. and fake hood no problem dickride grammy
jesus
kid dont have a license how-in-rhyme take a driver seat
im given him lessons how-to-suck-mine got a baby seat
bad grammar, bad analogy, bad punch, bad bar.
this kid gerber baby wack like face to carrot beef jelly
roll his ass diper to fetal to ovary...then i stick his mom and head butt him a melody
wack, period.

*how do i even explain something
like this without forcing complete
negativity? son, this was the worst
verse ive seen, i mean ya topicals are
not so bad, some of them are good...
but i guess thats where you draw the
line. good effort, now you know where
you stand.

New Method
Good luck?? Shit you betta bring ya 4 leaf clover
You’ll win this battle…..when hell freezes over
short, too short...but simply decent.
You from minestoa man you aint street g
And if I couldn’t tell from ya name shit ya verses are beneath me
not even a punch, dont end a line with a pronoun.
Ill shoot first we all know that im quick to pull it!
have him Caught up in a “catch 22”.... yea all of my bullets!
umm wasnt feeling it.
Your goin nowhere in hip hop but, shit...ill help just to be sincere
i'll shove ya lines off a cliff to give a hand to ya career
if this had a connection it would have been good.
This kid cant fight back shit…..i'll have his fists holdin his puke
then shove ya hands down ya throat ….so ya could throw up ya dukes
wow, this one actually had a punch.

*not the best verse ive seen from
you, but not the worst verse on this
page, so you win. some lines, ok fuck it...
most of the lines were filler/unecessary.
or they just had no punch. so you still
get my vote, due to the fact ya verse
was full of complete wackness, youve
won with one good bar. congrats.

vote: New Method

both verses were ......... but good luck to both.

-eph

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