^ i dunno if i can still vote....but, my vote would go to wet willy.....i thought both verse were great, actually, both had good emotion, great imagery, some good stuff in this, thought clear had better wordplay and vocab, but willy, you imagery and emotion was a little more defined, and i felt i could relate to yours a little more because i've often felt that way, and have seen alot of poverty....but i think that clear's ending kinda ruined to flow and mood of the story, i didnt think it fit in all that well, and willy was more consistent...........so thats what i thought after reading both

v/willy

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