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Old 05-08-05, 03:15 PM   #5
Kawn Flixx
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This was a really good drop, i was really feeling it ,
you had lots of emotions , good feeling
Lots of imagery , ..
Structure was on point.. you had nice flow
Wordplay n vocab was good ..
You used very deep and poetic words, that created an image in
the readers head , and that was really good
Overall it was a good drop, keep it up
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