NT- The drug tangent was a pretty good direction for the topic. The thing came off as an inner monologue with some brag type stuff at the start, not a great verse for a topical. The vocab was kind of simple and the imagery a little too braggadocious instead of focusing on some kind of storyline for the piece.

JTR- This came off as a 'standing on the soapbox' type of rant that was a little more inkeeping with a topical piece. The take on the topic was a fairly obvious one but you illustriated it well enough. The rhyme scheme could've been stronger, the vocab was solid enough.


I dunno if votes will count for this seeing as JTR dropped late.

vote- JTR, if this still counts.