aight, this was good.

Disrespecting And Placin Labels And Names upon the Vets,
Just Because They Lost a Fucking Game On The Net...
^^^^Hot and True.

Now To Address The Return Of A Legend
Who Was Destined To Make a Return To The Textin,
People Talk Tellin Me Your Skill Has Lessened,
But When It Comes Down to It, Im Not Who They Bested,
Or Better Than, Never Claimed To Be A Veteran
Or Ever Test The Relevance,
^^^^this was hot, but i've never heard of "bested" so forced rhyming didn't grab me.

Absolutely Absorb Bastards By Causing Cataclysmic Disasters,
^^^^Dope Alliteration.

Back Up Fore We Blast Ya With UV Rays That Turn Bitchs To Ashes,
What You Packing?, Flow That Does Flips And Causes kids To Do Acrobatics,
Hope you Know Gymnastics,
^^^^ this was fire, period.

flow - i haven't heard 2/3 beats, so i was iffy reading the verses, but i'm sure it flowed alright.
multis - you had'em, none really eye-catching.
structure - clean, real nice.
vocab - dope.
metas/similes - had some simple ones that made sense. better some then none.
concept - returning to teach, hot.
overall - 8/10

-A. SkyLL

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