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Old 11-05-04, 03:17 PM   #7
Terse.
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Carson--
Arch, I wanna know. How much u pay for that quote from Yvonne...
Come on....Seriously, RB still hasn't noticed that Rascal's gone-
good personal...
You lack the bronze, Son, ya drops...I peepd, They simply Bore me.
Let's face the facts...Your only here because you run the tourney
ehh...decent i guess
The champion?...of what?...shit your worste than S-Dizzle
Shit your skill must be hiding right next to Iraq's missles'
....nah
Arch' you get the gist'?...Finals? you jus don't belong in this.
I mean...I'm audio...shit...an ur not even on Spul's top 20 list
okay personal
Break the back bone, flip the torso...and leave u cryin out in morse code-
Ripped-so-forcefull, This archeoligist aint so Resourcefull
okay nameplay....but meh closer

Carson, not a bad verse IMO...but then again, not a good verse considerin that this is the final battle...i thought u had a couple of holes here n there, but overall, u were consistent wit decent personals/punches...

Arch--
Your wack Carson, i'll bring war to This fag cause he raps soft..
See "Cars" like the Karate Kid..
...When he hears me Wax On, he Whacks Off..
...ehh
Gotta spit wild, so ripping his inner child, bursting his bubble..
Threw Globes at this bitch, and put him in a World full or Trouble..
lol...decent
Carson tryed to run TLL but Rb kidss brought him down witha fall..
Your girls on my dick, tryna Gimme Delight like she's Sean paul..
nah
..This Fag needs a lesson on how to write and i'll teach..
Then beat him with some Candy, to show him revenge is sweet..
hmm...i think it coulda been worded better...good concept tho
"Old Navy Hoody And A Backwards Cap." What The End Said..
Carson's just a Homo gansta. Click and See how Carson gives head..
blah closer...

Arch, i really think u coulda done better...i thought both verses had a lot of filler/below average lines, but u had more, so u didnt have enough heat here to outshine Carson's verse....

V/ Carson, for more consistency and an overall better verse...