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Old 01-26-06, 10:05 PM   #11
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the beat is aiigh
1st dude, flowin nicely, not really feelin his style. "i showed my wings for a pair of feet" line was nice. nice multis
I like how Ecko comes in. likin Ecko style more. a few spots wheres there's a SLIGHT stop and go flow goin on. i like the whole demeanor on your verse.
scan again, likin this 3rd verse better then the 1st. hmm, he tries to punch in but messes up a lil bit, but after that he keeps up the flow.
word,
an entire track of straight spittin, not too bad
imma give it a 7/10.
content wasnt really outstandin, but some tracks can display just raw flowin energy and this is what this was.
decent shit.
wouldnt mind hearin more from Scan.
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