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Old 01-23-05, 05:43 AM   #59
Logic The Goonie
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Man this was garbage. All you did was tell a boring story with a few big words. Flow was offffffffffffff. Emotion wasn't there, you don't use words like "Whack" when you're trying to be real. Did I already say how bad the flow was? Horrible. Dont center your shit cuz it fucks up the reading abilities, I don't care how pretty it looks. You gotta get more fuckin creative and get deeper into the lyrics, cuz this was TRASH.

3/10
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