well its kinda hard to break down a freestyle man....cause you cant really say nothing about lyrics...caust it IS a free....

but i will say.....work on pronunciation...it may be the mic...i dunno...but it seems like some words you slur around...and it sounds like your talking with spit in your mouth...but it honestly could be the mic...i really cant tell....

but yea...theres not a whole lot you can break down with a freestyle....cause a free is tons different than the elements of song making...

but come back with a full song..and ill be happy to break it down

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