Thread: An Endless Loop
View Single Post
Old 04-02-07, 08:58 PM   #7
Lay.
don't try.
 
Posts: 991
From: Above you.
IP:

This was a good piece man. I liked those lines he mentioned to..but yea there was to much vocab in there to get a feel for the story..good vocab n' all but it kind of was harder to read if ya know what I mean. I still liked it. Keep it up man.
__________________
Fear
  Reply With Quote