shit mizz i dont think i have ever read any of ya work that was average or weak....
mad knight not sure if this is the 1st time me check'in out ya stuff but this was good...

flow was onpoint..
creativeness was onpoint i like the story ya pick and how ya went about it...
emotion: was all there i felt every bar as if i was there...
topic twist: was good the way ya end it was good, and those parts where u tryed to kill him but couldnt only to get killed nicely done..

all around good work....

10/10 WHY NOT IT WAS WORTH IT!!....