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Old 10-29-04, 04:05 AM   #8
Triple_N
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Breakdown for carson.....


Changed the name. Now we think your some champion-right?
Wrong, not wit-in ya sight. Ur just another Phantom-hyped.

EH...this was fair....u were kinda reaching tho

Hit the light's. This kid's livin in the dark, thinken he got spark
Reppin crew's, but like your sig...A "eye" don't even fit the part...

Wordplay......always a good thing..setup is blah

Like ur stuck in park, Rate's. Ur not pullin the right gears in here-
They ain't gon' cheer....Soc u want Fan's? You better go to Sears.

lol.....nice comedy..line is just fair tho


Fuk spittin....or hackin.....I don't need your IP adress...
I'll rip thru pixel's, Grip ya neck and leave your box voiceless

WORDPLAY again...best line right here..nice

Make you confess...This image you make..It's not what you are...
This South Kali Killa aint even old enuff to legally drive a car......

nah that was wack..need more...wit some wordplay or something woulda been ill

So....

Forget the belt's, If your a champ,....Than to win's insult....
And remember this...your only here because you MOD yourself....

Eh...I see the personal but...nah

Scarred wit welt's, Soc I'm playin...I never meant for ur pain.
But it aint like ur checkin. We never met. You jus saw my name.

wordplay again...decent shouldn't have used a s a closer though but decent


Soco's Breakdown...........

It's "ooo"s and "ahh"s as soon as Soc steps in the faction
Compared to me,the -OH's you get only qualify as basic reactions!

SEtup is blah & too braggish..and fractions seems like it jus there to rhyme wit reactions...punch is fair..coulda been stronger

Really, compared to you, Soc's a fuckin legend, im the hoods star
While the only hood youve ever been to,was at the front of your car!

NO!!!!this is just wack...way too basic

The shit you spit is boring, gives everyone of us a snore
You used to know better...........but you and I dont talk anymore!

Ok this is really weak an fillerish

We know Vanilla Ice's reincarnation, is uglier and even more slow
So just make ya lyrics how ya "Pixar".........not "Finding Nemo"!

setup is played as fuck but punch was nice

Usually in this type of situation, kid would run away he aint a fool
But when he saw he was facin me, he shoulda "Jet" times 2!

Blah..just bragging not a diss to opponent

This bitch is wrecked imma conclude your entire career
Why did i vote for you every round? for an easy win when i got here!

THats not a diss man..again just bragging

Carson...your verse was not very strong but far more complex....an that pixel line was a monster best line of battle by far.

Soco...I was really disappointed in your performance...I expected more...you usually have ill personals..what happened?......the nemo line was good & your best line an most complex line which isn't good cuz the like was just ok not a monster


SO I gave it to carson for his good wordplay in the 2 lines I highlighted...that pixal line took u over the top.....good luck & no hate to either emcee.



Vote: carson
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