New to RV
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IP:
its definately different, coulda been more complex, it reminds me of something on the linkin park board style wise, granted its a keystyle tho it got better all the way through, since you was introducin tha character at first.. just need to deepen that skill a bit and bring it all together....
my fav lines:
And all he wanted was pussy from this girl named Anne
Without any protection he fucked her like a ram
He kept her for a couple more days for his pleasure
All her family searchin like she’s a pirates treasure
keep spittin em man
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