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Tight rhyme, kinda reminded me of a mid evil book, lots of talk of sorcery, and poetry. the way you worded it made it flow good, and had a lot of multies. one thing to do different though, is sometime its ok to write stuff like this (mostly poetry) but for rap, try to make something more ppl can identify with. overall, id say 8.3/10
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