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Voted For: .Wicked One.
Aiight look.. I dont wanna sound like an asshole, but both of you need to elevate a lot in text battling.. A lot of the wordplay you were both trying to use didnt help any disses at all.. Some of your bars were just useless filler.. WAY too much self glorification.. Intensify you need to seriously work on your structure.. And both of you need to work on multi syllable rhyming..
I'm gonna give this vote to Wicked One mainly because I had less trouble catching his flow.. But seriously man, you need BIG work on punchlines.. And personals.. And basically everything else on text battling..
No hate at all.. It just really wasnt vet material from either..
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