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Old 06-26-07, 10:33 AM   #13
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LMAO @ mystics vote.

Sorry Lay


Sup, What up, say? I lay Facts onto this sprout for showing,
With fear Shoved in a Bag........ 'cuz my therapist suggests I be outgoing.
I'll put 4 flats in the side of ya head, and make it droll,
'Cuz I'm the only one Here who Lay 'Sphere into a hole......
I looked at your previous verses, and I won't make some shit up tonight,
I'm actually HALF baked.. like each 1/4th of a sentence that you write.



.vs



I seen the set up theme, lets keep the thought on hold awhile...
cuz..
what cards ya got to play?..< when that past tense sums up ya whole style



extremely one sided battle here. Lay Fear i've seen you do loads better
with punctuation/wording. I think you lacked in alot of directions here
2v you got a lil cocky at the end. But your first 4 lines crushed it.



easy vote.

V/2v
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