mixtape- ya gotta put more than a two word rhymin statement together and ya need some punches that arent forced or forced to flow together...need to make sence in your rhymes n follow da structure 1st line rhyme skeme follows the third o second and multis need punches and at least 2-3 word o syllables with the root rhymin word each phrase...3/10 being generous

Ub2ez...thank god found a piece with some what of a multi to vote on...haha...you flowed and actually had some multis...little lengthy cause its 4-6 lines but ya punches were aight liked da last 3 lines like hotshh pointed out pretty good ya take this one...ya vocab was alright n so was structure...give ya 7/10


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