Spul
This stupid college kid. You're shit, like feces
9th degree? More like ninth try at your degree
off, but ok
Your face is so ugly, even you kno that it's tru
I'd try to cover your face.......................
.....................................but it's already done by you!
talking bout the pic? okay...
°This °kid °sucks... -°and °he °is °wacker °than °me
Wanna kno who'll win? Jus look near the 9th degree
good thinking. i like it. but wheres the wordplay?
All you are you owe to your parents, but you don't count
Cuz you jus give them a penny............................
....................................and you more than square the account!!
umm i dont think so
You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
i hate that style, sorry
You got here wit no-shows, and by battlin' wack fucks
You could prolly get enough exercise, by jus pushin' your luck
haha, real dope line. serious
Your charade, we see through it, kinda like it was a mist
Your wins are 9th degree burns.................................
.................................................. ...... man... they don't exist
haha, good
Take you to tha "House of pain" was "jumpin around" in pic
only way you'll "ever-last" "hard", is some viagra, you "dick!"
first line = hot ..... second = un-hot
My flow, you kno, it go and make hoes, no-show
Am I gettin' dope wit you? Oh, yea... how would you kno?
totally missed the point
Your humongous post count... only time that you look big
Wanna kno where your tourney ends?................
.................................................. .. Man, jus click my sig
another good idea, but lacked wordplay as well

*well, your verse was sure good sir. yea, umm you set
off a little shaky but the verse picked up, the bars got
hotter, the personals god stronger, the fillers got fewer.
you had some new ideas put down in ya verse (the sig click,
and the 9th degree = me thing ) but for those to work. you
gotta have mad wordplay. trust. other than that...ya verse
was decently good........90%

9th Degree
Spul you've been duckin' me for months, I tried stayin' on your heels
But you're more shook than driving instructors with Asians at the wheel
i think ya talking bout Gone In 60 Seconds...good open
You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
haha, hot
They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
aahh, didnt like it
And crying to strobe is actually startin' to go out of fashion
…This guy's a gangster? His real name's Sebastian!
wheres the transition?
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
good shit
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
haha, haha
'Cuz if you were broke as ya rhymes she wouldn't let you touch her
You're wacker than a vote based on structure, motherfucker!
good shit, what kinda shmuck bases a vote on structure?
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia
okay
And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
decent...going downhill
And now I'm curious why I'm still kickin' this rhyme
'Cuz you ain't even worth my time to finish this…
...LINE. haha...decent closure.

*ya verse was real hot here. the flow was
magnatizing. and the punches were real on.
the personals reigned the fillers. killer verse.
umm the last 2 bars were decent. the rest
were completely Ill. but you had some good
comedy as well. verse was real good. trust.
ya verse was just a notch better.....92%

vote: 9th Degree

good verses yall & good luck.

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quote your own damn lyrics...