Sup, What up, say? I lay Facts onto this sprout for showing,
With fear Shoved in a Bag........ 'cuz my therapist suggests I be outgoing.
lol, ok..good concept...wording could be better 4/10
I'll put 4 flats in the side of ya head, and make it droll,
'Cuz I'm the only one Here who Lay 'Sphere into a hole......
really good concept..but wording again is not to good 6/10
Don't even claim you've seen the limits, This battle's BEEN mine to give pain,
& I'd point out everything wrong in your verse.. but I got 10 lines to explain.
played......lol..but still made it ur own...5/10
I looked at your previous verses, and I won't make some shit up tonight,
I'm actually HALF baked.. like each 1/4th of a sentence that you write.
no.....2/10
But let's look at the facts before you drop,
....I set this pen with patience,
.....Text to me is a hassle of 20 minutes tops.
Text to you is hopin' you absorb the information...
weak closer 4/10


overall:21/50...decent verse...most of your shit had good concepts..just didnt think the wording was put together right. Not as strong of verse as i would have liked to see from you..but still the basis of your verse kept you in it man....the wording is my only flaw..u work on that and u could have some dope concepts man...keep it up.



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I seen the set up theme, lets keep the thought on hold awhile...
cuz..
what cards ya got to play?..< when that past tense sums up ya whole style
lol nice man..lovin this punch..6/10
9 volt batteries couldn't energize a win, are you alive scum?
but if electric power and talent go hand in hand,......
.........................it just explains where ya name derived from
no...flow was terrible...concept..terrible...no...1/10
2v wants this battle intense, but honestly who can tell?
so when he say's he'll have a blaze of 'glorey'.......
........................It'll only remain true if you remove the L
good wordplay..n punch...liken the concept..5/10
he doesn't know the extent my punches'll go to
in my opinion in then end it will be 2v............otes for him total
...no...pretty bad man...lol 4/10
ya whack for sure, n ya fan base is low..its ez to see ya shows lame
still the only ill text head in the tourney...to brag about beating NO NAMES
best line in your verse! dope closer man 8/10

overall:24/50...pretty weak verse, had like 3 good bars in ya whole verse. But your opener and closer pretty much won this for you. Some of your concepts were straight up whack and noobish. But your other shit was fresh. Not a consistant battle from either of you. But I see lay fear with the stronger punches at that.

with that being said.

V/Lay Fear

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