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Old 08-23-05, 01:21 AM   #9
Indeph
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Oh this was pretty good.

I'ma crit everyone indivisually.

Spul: your flow was consistant. As was the rest of the group. But
your flow was faster. No one wonder you need high tempo beats.
Your lines were funny. Like the fuckin your hand thing. Good shit I like.

Ltizzle: Oh worD I've seen the lyrics from this alot so I was rappin along to it.
Flow was slower the spul and decree's but u did it well. Like me Only thing
I see wrong you did was how you got delivery is in reverse. You start off loud and end average toned. Where u spose to start average and end loud Lol But I got used to it, but change that and you set.

Decree:
You little fucker. Your lyrics were ill. You tryna be like fab.(I'm nas now then fag)
Your flow was good too. But yeah decree you garbage like brendas baby.

Nice anthem. I still own all of you thoug. OK!!
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