A Life Of Chryme
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Voted For: Intangible
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vs. nothing.
desipio..i felt your verse was very weak, you had no personals..no real apparent punches either...u just kinda went on about how you werent trying...never underestimate your opponent....your rhyming was a bit off i felt some lines you really forced your rhymes...just had a hard timing liking your verse...keep up and try and establish a flow...
intangible..i felt your verse was ok...nothing to special..but you had a better rhyme scheme and set ups for punches than your opponent..all your lines rhymed and even had some multies..which made the flow a little easier to catch..though the way you set up your lines makes it hard to establish the flow...but you had that 1 bar that just stood out from the rest..which is why you get my vote
v/intangible
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