thanks FAM and tornado...look RAP iis for txt battlers so stick to it if i wanted to flow i wouldnt put much emotino into it now this is more poetry?!...if so my whyme scheme would be diffrent and poetry doesnt need to rhyme does any of the words rhyme at teh end?!..YES poetry doesnt need to so NO this aint a poetic piece so please leave and thanks for cloggig the thread.

understabd this topical..has its own version of writing with flow and consistancy.
poetry is like a mystery to one's eye...
so your not comparing RAP vs. POETRY.


thanks critic my dude!
im down just fill me in on the topics

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