Mr. Write-Your verse was good, I really enjoyed the read. It was what you would call "short, but sweet". You had good imagery and really created a very vivid picture to go along with your verse. I felt you went along with your topic in a unique way and got a good concept out of your topic.

Moniker-Your verse was meh okay, I felt you had a hard time painting any picture with imagery. Just didnt really do anything for me..Don't think you had your whole concept down for your topic. Better luck next week.

V/ Mr. Write, please hit my battle up as well.

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