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Old 11-12-04, 11:59 PM   #27
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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this dude thinks he has a rep, he has to be bluffing
hes not Running on Empty...hes just Gassed over Nothing
^kinda played.. i didn't feel like pastin the others, but a few of these lines were played but others were very nice punches, multis were pretty good..

After this battle.. you gonna fall so get ready for a spankin
What goes up must comes down...I just described ya rankings
^this was original, very nice..

you knew this'd happen, hate ta pull ya card n finish you in five...
computer nerd dun care if i hurt him..jus don't merk his hard drive..
Ill snap words, you know u aint winning, don't fake it b...
Cuz damn, half the fucking planet has already taken E...
abusively run efusive through, clean cut no bruise to suface...
beat me...com'on kid that only happens when i lose on purpose..
^ur verse was the more creative of the two, and more original.. except a couple of times u mentioned how ef could beat u but only when u lose on purpose.. that was prolly the only line u needed to remove.. this did seem like a quick drop but u had sum funny content and sum nice metas and ur punches were aight.. both y'all coulda came harder but ey, it's not for ur record..
my vote/ Newport

P.S. good luck with this.. i wanna see who's the champ after this one.. seems like it's gettin' serious in here..
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