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Old 05-08-05, 10:16 PM   #8
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You're not hard, bitch, I'ma beat you fast quick
Cuz you're more soft, than the shit, I wipe my ass wit
^^meh, kinda played concept.......4/10
Only time you get a "W" is when you spell out what you are:WACK
And if this win "goes wit you", it jus proves "opposites attract"*
^^again perdy played, not much creativity in this bar.4/10
Cuz the way you're spittin', man... it's like you're on "dope" probation
So the only time you're "up" on me, is in our country locations
^^ok decent.............5.5/10......
Take so long to spit, "Eazy-Duz-it"? Man, that's so wrong
You and dope.......... jus call that an oxymoron
^^??...shortest bar ive seen in a battle , up your complexity
this was boarderline wack filler...................1/10
I'm 6th, you're "42"nd, man, I'm better than you forever
Only time you're equal to me is addin' "4 and 2" together
^^this was nice...7.5/10
Knowin' you, you'll prolly take the "eazy" way, right to your grave
And I ain't talkin' bout drinks... when I say "kool" ends wit "AID"s
^^the relevency in this bar was crazy nice...9/10
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31/60, overall your last 2 bars saved this verse from being a
poorly written very played drop, if you wouldve kept the
consistency of the last 2 bars throughout your verse ,
this wouldve been a dope verse but instead it was average..
nice closer thou, shit was mad hot
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i got a feelin.. that ima loose this battle really quick
cuz spul might az well put a saddle on hiz dick
^^lol,.i get wha you sayin.....but eh..............4/10
of all ya rymez i seen, u only had 1 hot line...
1-978-660-8884...................
...................... but that wuz fo gay chat, not rymez*
^^lol,.omg, perdy original in my opinion koo-b.........6/10
im gonna stop ya PuLSe, but that dont mean that ya dead
advancing 2 next round? no knitting.............
........................ but spul wont b in that thread**
^^decent wordplay..........................6/10
dont have any STD's, but ya know that i come ill
but if i did have a STD, i prolly got it frum Jill***
^^complexity lacked in this bar..personal was eh.4/10
spul signed up fo this tourney knowing fo him it wuz non-profit
i dont make caskets..........................................
.....................but i used my wood 2 make hiz moms coughin****
^^brutal homie.decent closer...5/10
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25/50, overall your punches were decent, but lacked in complexity for
the most part, creativity was koo thou...personals were funny..
hotline was ya best bar.pretty damn close battle..........
props to both.....but ya just 50%........n spul is like 52%
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!