not sire if crew votes is allowed but battles gettin slept on so heres my vote:

LoT: you had a good verse...stayed on topic welll....decent imagery...wordplay was ok...your structure was really choppy tho...wasnt really feelin your rhyme scheme...decent vocabulary...i think the best thing about your verse was all the imagery it was pretty good...you more of told a story than described the topic...

overall : 7/10

mental anew: you had a good verse also...very good vocabulary.....great structure and wordplay.....flow was consistent....not too much imagery...your verse was the opposite of LoT's...you more of described the thoughts going through his mind than wrote a story about it which i liked better...nice verse

overall : 8/10

vote mental anew

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