Lot-Nice Vocab and your structure was good..
Very imaginary and How you worded it was good
NOt very much multies but similies was good and I liked it

8.9/10

Mental Anew-Your ish was hot also, Your stucture
was good and your vocab murked it, But you did have kindof
less lines but that doesnt really matter in a topical,
You had good metaphores and not much multies but Hot drop

8.6/10

v/Lot not by very much

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