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Old 10-08-04, 10:46 AM   #11
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battle pretty good

plutonium........u had a nice flow and structure with ure shit. ure punches were good, not hitting as hard as i've seen u do but still tight. i liked ure metaphors, u had some nice personals, especially riipin her femcee shit. not too creative, ure wordplay was aight and shit, but i have seen u do better. OVERALL 7.5/10

Yvonne.........a lot better from u, since we battled. ure flow was gud, but slightly choppy in some places, maybe u cud work on that. ure punches were there although they didnt come off as i think u intended them to. a couple hit fairly hard, but the majority were kinda weak. ure wordplay was average, but ure vocab was far too basic. u need to get more complex and shit. OVERALL 6.5/10

VOTE: Plutonium
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