^^ omg.. Kesse i think your very underrated this piece was beautiful.. i'll drop a vote when DQ gets in here.. but you had a great closing few bars.. and u really had alot of knowledge to back up your story.. your imagery was alrite, your emotion was definitely there.. but the one thing you did differently then i woulda done.. was overused vocab.. but never the less this was still a dope drop...

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