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Old 01-04-04, 12:20 AM   #8
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man fuck you nigga you pussy you soft
claim you to hottohandle bitch im the boss
^^^weak. doesnt make much sense.
my style is illmatic death with dimes and versees
your record fixing to be13 losses except the curses
^^^...uh, what? weak.
bitch im back ready to finish you you coward
tell your mama to be back 30minutes 13 seconds from a hour
^^^either you dont make sense, or you have some crazy insane style...which still wouldnt make sense. weak.
im back busting cussing gettin money checkin the ends
busting your family peoples and all of your friends
^^^weak, but, nonetheless, a punch.
come back next time to cold or to hottohandlr
im wetting your ass dropping bombs and knockin out your candle
^^^another bad punch...try not to force rhymes.
tell your mama im sorry the condom busted i didnt mean to be the one
to except the fact that bitch you my son
^^^this was ok. probably the highlight of the verse.


First of all get it straight, you dissin the wrong guy/
who the hell is 2hottohandlr, yo rhymes nothin but a lie/
^^^this makes sense, its just stupid.
it took you 1 day to reply cause you couldnt think of the rhymes to spit/
stop bein a hypocrit, why you wanna be like that/
^^^what the hell? it doesnt rhyme, or make sense. awful.
sorry, your in the wrong room, next left is gay chat/
yo rhymes weak like butter and mines like thunder/
then you sit back and wonder how you just lost, you motherfucker/
^^^oh i see, you have really bad structure. i got you...oh, and weak.
i cant believe i need to explain bout the game/
the industrys in trouble cause u the one to blame/
^^^more weak punches.
your 23 and your weak as hell/
im only 15, i guess thats how it is when your from the ATL/
you havent even been here for a month, you need to elevate/
with yo weak rhymes you shouldnt even participate/
^^^you're 2-12...try to stay real.
my rhymes are so good im like a genius/
im like the god so you should bow down and call me jesus/
^^^so close to clever wordplay.

vote: b.r. hustla.


...oh and, return the favor:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103574--vs. handcuffs
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